Wednesday, February 8, 2012

Senior Project Online Source Due February 9, 2012 (2)

“Specific Page Title or Article Title”
 Ex: Twilight: A negative influence on teens or just harmless fun?

Photoshopping: Altering Images and Our Minds!

Primary Contributor to the Website (if given) (author, editor, producer, etc)
Ex: POV

 Beauty Redefined
Title of the Entire Website (not www. )
 Ex: CBC News

 Beauty Redefined
Publisher or Sponsoring Organization of the website (if given)
Ex: CBC
 KiTE media
Date Page was Last Revised
Ex: 10 September 2010
30 November 2011
Date You Read It
Ex: 21 January 2012
7 February 2012
<URL address> (ALL of it)


FIVE FACTS FROM THE SOURCE (Embedded):
EX: The article cites Maria Nikolajeva, a professor of at Cambridge, as saying that Bella does not "in any way promote independent thinking or personal development" in women, instead portraying a woman "meek and willing to do anything for her vampire boyfriend" (POV).
Photoshop has become a big problem and people don't know big of an issue this really is. These altering images manipulate unrealistic ideals, "While the vast majority of images of women are being digitally altered, so are our perceptions of normal, healthy, beautiful and attainable" (Beauty Redefined). 
The medias main way to work is to use underweight models or close to underweight or using photoshop to make them look abnormally thin, "Essentially, 'the feminine ideal is tanned, healthy slenderness, with no unsightly bumps, bulges or cellulite, and bodily and facial perfection that results from hours of labor: exercise, makeup and hair care' (Coward, 1985) " (Beauty Redefined). 
Magazines dramatically alter woman to a point where they do not even look like themselves anymore, one example would be Kelly Clarkson's magazine cover, "It’s hard to believe anyone’s “personal best” is a fake representation of herself. They’ll plaster “body confidence!” all over the magazine and quote Kelly talking about her own real body confidence, but they refuse to show us her actual body" (Beauty Redefined). 
That was only one example that many people have noticed but in reality the photo altering is everywhere, magazines, billboards, television, etc. because all of these altered woman are everywhere, "those images form a new standard for not just “beautiful,” but also “average” and “healthy” in our minds. When women compare themselves to a standard of beautiful, average and healthy that simply doesn’t exist in real life, the battle for healthy body image is already lost" (Beauty Redefined).
Due to all of the manipulating the, " representations of women’s bodies across the media spectrum have shrunk dramatically in the last three decades, rates of eating disorders have skyrocketed – tripling for college-age women from the late ‘80s to 1993 and rising since then to 4% suffering with bulimia (National Eating Disorder Association, 2010).'" (Beauty Redefined).  


Summary of Source (Three-Four Sentences of the Who, What, Where, Why, and How in your own words. NO OPINION):

This article puts out that the media uses photoshop to transform a normal looking woman into an extravagant unrealistic person. As a result of these manipulated women, other women strive to be them by resorting to eating disorders, plastic surgery, etc. Women want to be them and men want someone like them. The article helps the readers realize that the women they see in the magazines are not real.

Credibility of Source:
Author or Site: Who is the author? What training have they had? If there is no author, examine the site. What is the purpose of the site? Who funds the site?
The purpose of this site is to expose the media of their true intentions and show the readers what they really do. Beauty Redefined funds this site.

Attachment: Does the author or site have anything to gain from writing this, or is it simply informative? For example, is it a cigarette business posting an article about the benefit of cigarettes, or is it a scientific community unaffiliated with the cigarette business?

From what I read I don't think they have anything to gain from writing this. It is more of an informative site. It is informing its readers how the media transforms photographs.

Bias: Do you detect a bias (a favoring of either side) in the author's writing?
Yes there is a little bias. in the fact that on the negative effects of how the media manipulates people in how people should look to be beautiful.



References: Does the author cite references in the writing? If so, do these add or take away from the credibility?
Yes the author does cite a couple references in the writing. It adds credibility to the article. 




Use of Source: How will you use this source in your project?
I plan to use this source as evidence to how the media manipulates the people's minds as to how they should look. Also how the media transforms photos and the end result can come out not even looking like the person at all. I want to use this to help prove to people that even the people in the magazines don't look like that so they should be happy with themselves.

Tuesday, February 7, 2012

Senior Project Online Source Due February 9 (1)

“Specific Page Title or Article Title”
 Ex: “Twilight: A negative influence on teens or just harmless fun?”


Body Image
Primary Contributor to the Website (if given) (author, editor, producer, etc)
Ex: POV


no author available
Title of the Entire Website (not www. )
 Ex: CBC News


Our Bodies Ourselves
Publisher or Sponsoring Organization of the website (if given)
Ex: CBC


Boston Women's Health Book Collective, Inc.
Date Page was Last Revised
Ex: 10 September 2010


2011
Date You Read It
Ex: 21 January 2012
February 2,2012
<URL address> (ALL of it)




FIVE FACTS FROM THE SOURCE (Embedded):
EX: The article cites Maria Nikolajeva, a professor of at Cambridge, as saying that Bella does not "in any way promote independent thinking or personal development" in women, instead portraying a woman "meek and willing to do anything for her vampire boyfriend" (POV).
Our present day culture has been driven by the media but the sad truth is that the media lies, female bodies are "airbrushed and plastic-surgery-enhanced. It’s not surprising that... our views of what women should look like are warped.19 Real women with pubic hair and breasts that aren’t perfect round orbs begin to seem unnatural compared to the altered images we see in the media," (Our Bodies Ourselves).
Before the media was even invented, before the camera, the "idea of beauty was limited to our own communites. Until the advent of photography in 1839, people were not exposed to real-life images of faces and bodies" (Our Bodies Ourselves).
 The media in the olden days did not really broaden their horizons on who was in front the camera, "Most of the women we see in the media are young and white. Hollywood movies rarely feature women over forty, and the older women we do see represented in the media, from movie stars to news anchors and even politicians, look much younger, thanks to plastic surgery" (Our Bodies Ourselves). These woman needed to look flawless especially if they were over forty. If the woman that were in the public eye did not look perfect people would look at them as if they are "letting themselves go". 
It is very sad to say that the media even affects the women with disabilities as well. They have been brought down to a needy victim and need assistance/ protection, " Because women with bodies that are disabled, fat, or old are seen as deviating from what is "normal" and desirable, we are often presented as stereotypes, rather than as real people" (Our Bodies Ourselves). 
"The media eye, in its many different forms, objectifies all of us" (Our Bodies Ourselves). The media has gotten us to instead of us enjoying what is going on around us we think about how we look while we are doing something, an example would be when you are running, instead of thinking about how good you feel about running you think about how you look like in other people's eyes. 




Summary of Source (Three-Four Sentences of the Who, What, Where, Why, and How in your own words. NO OPINION):


This article talks about how no one is perfect but they have to look perfect. So to make them perfect women get plastic surgery or have their photos enhanced. In the article it says how most woman that are used in the media are young white women. For the rest of the women like the colored, old looking, and disabled, they are shown as not normal. 


Credibility of Source:
Author or Site: Who is the author? What training have they had? If there is no author, examine the site. What is the purpose of the site? Who funds the site?


The author is not given for this article. The purpose of this site is to help women understand that the perfect bodies and faces that are shown on tv, magazines, etc. are not really perfect. It is okay for a woman to have flaws. You not thinking about these little things will make you happier. Our Bodies Ourselves funds this site. 




Attachment: Does the author or site have anything to gain from writing this, or is it simply informative? For example, is it a cigarette business posting an article about the benefit of cigarettes, or is it a scientific community unaffiliated with the cigarette business?


The other does not really have anything to gain from this site other than making women happier with their lives and stop making them worry so much about the other women around them. 


Bias: Do you detect a bias (a favoring of either side) in the author's writing?


I do detect the article being a little bias yes, because it only talks about how the women used in the media are so perfect and they get plastic surgery to look like that. 


References: Does the author cite references in the writing? If so, do these add or take away from the credibility?

The site does use a few quotes from women talking about how they feel about the media and how it has affected them in their lives. 



Use of Source: How will you use this source in your project?


I plan to use this source to help me get it clearer for people to understand that no one is really perfect and we do not have to look like the people in the media. We should be happy with ourselves and how we are and enjoy every minute of it or it is possible to cause problems in your lives. 

Monday, January 30, 2012

Senior Project Online Source Due Wednesday February 1, 2012

“Specific Page Title or Article Title”
 Ex: “Twilight: A negative influence on teens or just harmless fun?”
Exploring the role society and the media play in the development of an Eating Disorder and the Media Influence on Eating Disorders
Primary Contributor to the Website (if given) (author, editor, producer, etc)
Ex: POV
Karyn, Leah, Gina, Evelyn, & Melissa 
Title of the Entire Website (not www. )
 Ex: CBC News
something-fishy 
Publisher or Sponsoring Organization of the website (if given)
Ex: CBC
 The Something Fishy Website on Eating Disorders: 
Date Page was Last Revised
Ex: 10 September 2010
2007
Date You Read It
Ex: 21 January 2012
21 January 2012
<URL address> (ALL of it)

FIVE FACTS FROM THE SOURCE (Embedded):
EX: The article cites Maria Nikolajeva, a professor of at Cambridge, as saying that Bella does not "in any way promote independent thinking or personal development" in women, instead portraying a woman "meek and willing to do anything for her vampire boyfriend" (POV).
 The article gives a comparison on "With approximately six billion people in the world, and a mere ten million of them suffering with some type of disordered eating (.18% of the overall population -- less than a   of 1%),"().
 It shows that "(Current statistics indicated that approximately one in every one hundred teenage girls may develop an Eating Disorder)"(). 
What these writers have shown is that there are not many people being effected by the media.  Children have been taught by their parents that it is the inside that counts but on the other hand the television programs, "rarely depicts men and women with "average" body-types or crappy clothes, ingraining in the back of all our minds that this is the type of life we want. 
Overweight characters are typically portrayed as lazy, the one with no friends, or "the bad guy", while thin women and pumped-up men are the successful, popular, sexy and powerful ones"(). It has come off to children that the fat guy or the kid with ugly clothes are unhappy in life and the children/teens end up wanting to grow up just like the rich skinny people. 
Pressures of looking perfect are not only stressed in the media but it is also stressed in the athletic world as well, "Gymnast Christy Henrich died from complications due to her Eating Disorder in 1994, at 22 years of age. Nadia Comaneci, Cathy Rigby and Kathy Johnson have all come forward and admitted to battling with Anorexia and Bulimia," ().


Summary of Source (Three-Four Sentences of the Who, What, Where, Why, and How in your own words. NO OPINION): 

This article does not only talk about how the media causes eating disorders, but many others as well. Television has been an influence on kids with just the little things, for example on shows the people that dress frumpy or are fat or ugly are usually the ones that are unhappy with their lives, while the skinny pretty and well dressed people are happy and satisfied with their lives. Other than television the article talks about how even barbies have affected children because little girls want the body of barbie and the perfect life that they are able to control. Kids are not the only ones wanting to look "flawless", this article also covers that athletes also have gone through the terrors of a eating disorder to have that perfect body.

Credibility of Source: 
Author or Site: Who is the author? What training have they had? If there is no author, examine the site. What is the purpose of the site? Who funds the site? 

The purpose of this site to inform readers where the main sources that cause eating disorders. I do not know who funds this site.
Attachment: Does the author or site have anything to gain from writing this, or is it simply informative? For example, is it a cigarette business posting an article about the benefit of cigarettes, or is it a scientific community unaffiliated with the cigarette business? 

This site does not have anything to gain for writing this, I am pretty sure that it is merely an informative article. 


Bias: Do you detect a bias (a favoring of either side) in the author's writing? 

I do not detect the cite being bias because they do not pin point a certain reason why people had eating disorders. The first paragraph alone shows that it is not bias because it says " Okay, so we all want to hear how Calvin Klein is the culprit and that the emaciated waif look has caused women to tale-spin into the world of Eating Disorders. While the images of child-like women has obviously contributed to an increased obsession to be thin, and we can't deny the media influence on eating disorders, there's a lot more to it than that "

References: Does the author cite references in the writing? If so, do these add or take away from the credibility? 

The website does not have any other references to anyone else. It has a few links to different subjects but it is still the same source just different articles. 

Use of Source: How will you use this source in your project? 

I plan to use this source to help me prove my point that the media does affect how a person can feel about themselves and can lead them into eating disorders.

Friday, January 6, 2012

senior project proposal

Senior Project Proposal

Proposed Topic in the form of an  Essential Question:
How has the media's perception of the perfect man and woman effected society?
Rationale for Choice
What about this topic appeals to you? Why did you choose it?
This topic appeals to me because I always look at magazines and movies and look at the men and women and always wonder what it takes for people to look like that. 
What do you already know about this subject?
The perception of perfection in the media these days have gotten normal people to resort to anorexia and bulimia to become like the people in the magazines and on tv. 

What are you hoping to learn about the subject?
I am hoping to learn what the celebrities/models go through to become the way they are and what is real and what isn't real and how I can help the people know that they are beautiful the way they are. 

What are you most interested in regarding the topic?
I am mostly interested in picking at the "perfection" to show people the truth so they do not torture themselves anymore to look like the person in the picture/screen.                                                                                                                                              
What potential risks or challenges do you foresee for your project?
The challenges or risks I can see coming are probably figuring out what I would do for the volunteer hours and also finding a lot of information and sources.

Wednesday, December 7, 2011

I believe...

1. I believe that the senior project is one of the most unnecessary time consuming projects.
2. I believe middle school and high school kids try to grow up too fast
3. I believe this school needs to lighten up on every policy they have.
4. I believe that the minimum wage should be raised.
5. I believe people need to stop being two faced.

1. I honestly believe this project is unnecessary. Alright I understand if seniors should have something big that they need to do for the year, but teachers are blowing it out of proportion. No offense to all the teachers of course. But half of the things that are being assigned for this project are just tedious and not needed. For example standing up in front of the class for 15 minutes talking about our topic is a little too long. I have not gotten all the exact details to the project yet and I am already dreading the beginning.